Friday, August 30, 2013

Short Story

It's another Thursday afternoon, and mike is on his way to work as usual. The train is some what crowded but enough for almost everyone to have a seat. The train just left 42nd street and is now heading to 34 street. As the train starts to slowly decrease Its speed, mike takes a slow but through look at his car, and notices a few attractive women nothing worth taking a second look at. The train comes to a complete stop, and he is waiting for the mob to wheel themselves in hoping that he doesn't get crowded and at that instant he sees her. Normally his mind would race with thoughts of sexual adventures, but not this time! He could not pass the thought that her beauty gave him. The way her hair rested above her eyebrows, and the soft golden  
shimmer the light gave her hair as she glided across and infront of him! She was about 5 foot 4 inches, she must of been 130, but held her weight very well. He found himself stuck on stupid. She sat directly In front of him at the back three seats on the a train! Mike found himself making everyone one in the train disappear and just focus on  this beautiful person that just lit up the cart! Trying to be subtle he analyzed her clothes and followed by her accessories. He caught himself being impressed that so much was packed in such a small  
package! Mike felt as if she was someone he could never approach, well  
not in the train at least. He tried not to make it obvious that he enjoyed her presence infront of him so much. He more than occasionally look her way and manage to get a ploite smile, with a touch of annoyance his way! He felt it but could not stop admiring her. The  
train is now on 14 street and is being held up by some delay. Mike is debating with himself on wether or not he should make a move and just try to establish some kind of conversation. As he sits there thinking he says to himself "this is way out of my league!" he is giving up on  
himself more as the seconds go by, but as he is at his most doubtful moment he hears this small voice in his head telling him that he has nothing to lose. So as he preps to get up he notices that another guy was going in to do the same thing that he was! Mike just adjusted himself in his seat so that no one would notice or think that he was about to get up. He trys to focus on thier conversation that they are trying to have. It's was unclear what they were talking about because the conductor was talking over the loud speaker telling the passengers that they will start moving shortly. So the train is on the move and they are chatting , but in short spurts. The train gets to west 4 street and as the train stops I look over to see that she has an expression on her face that doesn't seem to be pleasant. What ever he said last was what ruined his chances, and with that she asked him to just leave her alone. He complied and left talking under his breathe calling her all types of names. Mike knows he has to get off at the next stop. So he pondered on wether he should go and talk to her. He said to himself that he was not going to talk to her, there was no time. So he got up as the train skipped Spring st. he fished out one of his business cards that already had his info. So he turned slowly and made sure he locked eyes with his gorgeous target and committed. He approached her and said "I would like to get to know you better, but not in the train and not after the last guy. call if you are up for it, enjoy the rest of your afternoon" and just as the doors opened he walked away and got of the  train with the biggest smirk on his face, because he saw the look of amazement on her face as he turned away.

To be continued... 

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